Alexandra, your response is fantastic! The imagery and use of dialogue makes this creative appealing. The shift between third and first person narration again really adds appeal to this piece of writing. Tolstoy’s appreciation for the outside world is made apparent immediately from your opening line. I believe that you have effectively captured Tolstoy’s demeanor and personality through your writing, focussing on Tolstoy’s humanitarian nature.
Thank you
Hayley
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